Blue
The clam blue
It's like water
But then is disturbed by waves
Like rippling waves
The smell of sea
The flavor of sea from the salt
Drip drip drip
The cool sensation
I loved this poem because of the use of literary devices in your poem. our similies really pulled me into the poem and really allowed me to understand what you were describing in your poem. I also loved the way your imagery felt as if I was smelling great seas and tasting sea salt. I also loved how you used an onomatopoeiain a way where it works in the same way as imagery does. -Demitrius Hilerio
I loved this poem because of the use of literary devices in your poem. our similies really pulled me into the poem and really allowed me to understand what you were describing in your poem. I also loved the way your imagery felt as if I was smelling great seas and tasting sea salt. I also loved how you used an onomatopoeiain a way where it works in the same way as imagery does.
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